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  1. Thank you Everyone for your Suggestions and Advice. My Partner Alex Blue Bird and I been working on the cover … Re Written the Blurb Personally Alex Blue Bird Done a New Illustration for the Cover. kept the Yin Yang Art in the Back. What do you think. ..
  2. Cover Done Written the Novel Book Blurb ( Blossom and the Dragon ). Is my grammar and spelling okay ? Is the Blurb Suspenseful. enough ? .
  3. That is Awesome You do a Beautiful Job with the Covers. do you have the Template.. I need to finish the cover in my novel series too however I'm clueless on the template part.
  4. Font style choices Please. ( Blossom and the Dragon ) Blossom is a Furry Equine Clyony Species. I personally Invented the word for the new species, for my written novel series. Her body sports a more furry Clydesdale horse like style. The Dragon is Skyler a creature in the story. I don't know much about Font Rules.. However I do not want to get Sued by the font owner.. Personally I do not mind paying for the license to use the font . However there are limitations restrictions and rules. I'm considering Designing my Own Font Style like I did for my Trademark.. the color background what do you think o.k. Needs Improvement . Alex Blue Bird Sketch Style of my Characters. combined with my tweaks in the design Alex Blue Birds Color style. Alex Blue Bird Illustration Skills is Shattering EPIC ! Should I use my Full name or The initial and use my last name. What do you think ?
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    TradeMark Logo Design.

    Made my Trademark Logo in Affinity Design... Registering both the Logo and the name ''The Clyonies. '' here in Canada What do you think of my choice in Logo Design...
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  7. Because of Serif Affinity Design. I been Doodling a Mega Monstrous Storm of Ultamate Creativity.. There is Way more I still have yet to load... I even Created my Trademark Logo that my Lawyer is Processing. I will soon Own my very own Franchise here in Canada Once I get the Green Light from my Lawyer, I will post my Trademark Logo here for all to see. Hugs Laurie Ann Garland
  8. 'A day for love, sweetness of Romance. Hold to Your Heart as you both embrace. Looking into one anothers eyes, as you kiss the lips on each others face."' Happy Valentines Day Everyone Laurie Ann Garland
  9. JK Rowling too Struggled bringing Harry Potters Story to a publisher, she got turned down many times, however she refused to give up, been persistant.. And because her determination, the Story of Harry Potter is well known around the world,. Im like JKRowling, I refuse to give up. Her skills are with writing... For me i have 4, writing, poetry, illustration and Song Rewriting. Many people tell me i should go to a publisher.. I can easily get into coloring books first. Got over 100 Illustrations done even colored them... I'm a vector Artist... My #1 program i use Serif Affinity Design. It's Epic and perfect the cool thing about this program you can do both vector and raster art. I even create new Species Names.. And design my own charecters I plan to Publish Novels in my series. I even Created my own Guardians for my creation.. Here is sneak Peek.. I have Many Skills Poetry being my First Skill in life, i use to rhyme a lot in my childhood.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is a Poem I written a few Months Ago in Honor of our War Vets.. "'The Poppy a Flower To Remember'' As we read the news, A war going on, In our past hometown land. We choose to volunteer, To save our country, And help our fellow man. Dressed in our uniform, Giving a heart felt embrace. To the ones we hold dear to our hearts, As we leave for the battle we face. As we cram in giant planes, And in ships waiting for us at port. A felling of mixed emotions consume, To the people we help and support. The journey is long, Yet we grow anxious to arrive. Knowing very well, Many of us will sadly, Not come back home alive. Making it to our destination, Flooding out from ships, And dropping from the sky. Seeing the dangers, Chaos we face. We give it all we got. We race towards booms and blasts, For Freedom is worth a Lot. We struggle on Deadly Ground’s, Trying to Stay alive. Hoping we make a Difference, I sit in my trench, Given a moments, For a quick break. Seeing the dead and injured, People fighting everywhere. The odor in nauseating, It's more than I can bear. Yet I quickly spring back up, Fire my gun, At enemy lines. All of a sudden, I feel a strike near my spine... As I lay there bleeding, Far to injured to move. As I look upon the field, A beautiful red flower, Captures my view. I close my eyes, And think back to all the memories, I been with you. The way you brush your hair, in the morning, I would just sit and watch. The way you would laugh, When I goof off a lot. Remembering how teared up you were, When supper was ruined, Yet I still ate every little bite. Wanting to take you out of your failure mood, Giving you confidence , Someday you will get it right. Hearing I was going to be a father soon, The happy joy as we embrace. The painful tears that fell, From the both of us, When i had to leave for base. Yet here I lay dying, Not much time left to spare. Please remember the Red Poppy, For I will always be there. May its Red Color remind you, Of my sacrifice. I gave my Heart and soul, So you can live you life.. I Laurie Ann Garland Writer of ''The Poppy, A Flower to Remember'' in Honor of all Our War Vets, Past, Present, and the Future. Dedicate this poem to the War Vets. They have giving us their lives, limbs, even their very souls so that we may live in Peace and be Free. may we reflect on this Historic day that many Brave Men, Nurses, Doctors , and everyone involved, whom sacrificed and risked their lives. So that we will have peace and live to be Free. Thank You for Everything, Laurie Ann Garland ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Here is the Craziest Part...Crystal Frost was first Doodled on the Ipad with my Finger using the App Sketch Club.in 2017 That is when her story came to my head. I Doodled over 100 Illustrations of her Alone Yes Im a doodle A Holic., I would Churn out 4 to five of her doodles on each sitting. I would also Write Little Random Stories about her. What Sparked the Idea.. I was watching MLP FIM with my Daughters, then Twilight Sparkle said, "'Ponies know very little about dragons because they were to afraid or scared to go near them.'' Then an idea raced through my head what if a pony got lost in the woods, got chased by dangerous wild creatures, and was saved by a dragon. They Became good friends,yet as time moved on their friendship bloomed into a relationship, that resulted in he being pregnant for the dragon. unable to stay home she leaves with the dragon, they both go into the wild land, to have their baby and raise the little one on their own. At first it was just some random stories here and There. And i started to like where the story was going. Went to MLP Arena with my idea, told them my plan to Pitch Crystal Frost Story to Hasbro. They told me Hasbro gets many spin off pitches of the MLP TV series All the time, they told me I was very Creative, their Advice was to Wipe out everything Hasbro MLP related in my Story, Created my Own Kingdom and World, and Put Crystal Frost Story in it. On March 2018 within 4 Days i created the ''The Story of Crystal Frost, The Kingdom of Long Heart Stone, and Beyond. '' before that it was just a few random stories, and A lost of Crystal Frost art Doodles, However after that Date 97% of the Creation was created after that More Stories Flooded to Me, More Species, More Creative Worlds and the important roles each species had in the stories.. Over time I realize.... that my story had a Pattern it was a Family Tree Time Line.. Loved it So Beautiful. My series span to 25 novels in the series.. Here is the list with a few samples in between... Our Little Miracle The Story of Crystal Frost......Sneak peek.... ( When you wish upon a star Weather you are near or far.. Shining hope up in the sky Makes you tear up want to cry. Want to stay with all my heart Sadly I have to go depart My little child listen to me Your mother loves you so fondly. Yet the time has come to past Your father you will go at last My dearest child one last verse I say I love you with my heart, you will always forever stay... ) Challenges of Being a Father. Return of Crystal Frost The Kingdom of Long Heart Stone Family Unity Tragedy Shatters..........Sneak Peek....... ( Seeing her father obsess over only work and her baby brother wanting to hold him all the time, starts to feel left out resentful for the baby... While her dad is at work, holding her sketch book, she hears her little brother now 2 years old, crying in the nursery, She goes inside,sketch book in her hoof, looks at him with tears in her eyes '' what are you crying For, mom held you in her arms for one full year, and she held on to me only once'' Tiger Lilly hearing the whole thing play out, tries to help Star Shine. However She Quickly turns on her'' what do you know,'' thinking back to that kiss at the festival'' you just wanted mom out of the way so you can have my dad all to your self.'' in tears she runs out of the room sketch book in her hoof..) Beyond the Kingdom of Long Heart Stone.. Star Knight Shines Journey A Dragon in The Kingdom of Long Heart Stone The Final Battle The Challenges of Sudden Change in Life The Truth will set you free Knight Wings Greatest Challenge. Frost Knight Storm Journey Visions of the Blind Varian Frost Swirl Romance and Tragedy........Sneak Peek.... ( The last day Varian, has to leave back to Military Base, seeing Hopes Mother Amanda, Confessing to her.’’ I love Hope more that anything,, I just don’t understand why her Father will not let us be.’’ Amanda respond.’’ He is Just afraid he will loose his baby girl.’’ Revealing to Varian, Adrian’s dream to have a big family. However the accident she been in, resulted in her unable to bear children ever again. The two still kept in the dark about the truth. ) Out of the Shadow and Into the Light Lost At Sea Survival On a Journey for Home The Burden of Knowing the Truth Luke and Lucas..........Sneak Peek..... ( Hearing a rustle in the forest, heart racing, as Anita Appears in his view, walking to towards Lucas her mane and tail decorated in beautiful blue and pink Ribbons, holding in her mouth. A bouquet of fresh picked Golden orange Flowers kept in place with a beautiful blue ribbon. Walking to the place to sand by Lucas side... The Priest begins '' We gather here, in the presence of nature and her beauty , before God and his Son to join these two in holy matrimony,'' continue on, looking over at Anita.'' Lucas wishes share his vow he wrote just for you.'' Lucas feeling nervous, yet with the passion in his heart, gains the courage, reaches for his paper. Looking over at Anita..... ) Snowfall and the Prince......... Sneak Peek... ( Hearing a rustle in the bushes, seeing Richard hoof out motioning her to leave. Turns around for one last look. A tear falling from her eye, dropping on the newborns face, waking up the infant causing her to open her eyes, seeing a clear view of her mother, The Newborn making baby cooing sounds happy to see her mother. Quickly leaves her baby behind, running into the woods, crying, heartbroken as she hers her newborn cries. Richard seeing how emotional Snowfall was through the whole situation quickly chases after her. Prepared to fight to defend the creature he is forbidden to love. ) Glacier Charity and the Guardian... I mixed tributes in my Novel series of creation as well .... Forbidden love Homelessness Trying to find your family war Vets Disabled Blind Youth whom run away from family Anti-social Birth defects Fire Fighters Solders Family couples whom are childless death life missing children Loved ones who leave yet sadly never see their family again And many many more. This is one Crazy Massive Intense Project. and I write every Day.. Here is a Sneak peek of the First Chapter in the first book in the Novel Series... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ In the middle of the woods, Deep in the thick forest of Tree Top Hills, a small lumber Village, busseled with Clyonies. They tilled the land, turning trees into lumber, distributing, the wood, being used, to build the homes , all across The Kingdom of Long Heart Stone. ''where did he go this time'' carrying her saddle bag Juliette Dew Drop walks through the small village. inside the village a small local grocery store, owned by Mr and Mrs Shops, sold a variety of fresh fruits and vegetables. A post office called, Clyasus Express, run by Stamp Wells, where flying Clyasus would come and go delivering parcels and mail to the locals. A small local paper called, News and Views. written, edited, photographed , by a Clyony named Flash dash the one and only reporter in the community.. A small school house nestled down by the brook, teaming with aquatic life, run my Miss Glass, where fillies and foal's would go to learn math, how to read, write, spell, and make friends. looking past the the school house, walking by the tall thick trees, Juliette Dew Drop notices a cleared path, she turns to follow the path and disappears into the thick treed forest... In a valley, stumps surrounding the lumber yard , timber stacked in piles. The clyony wood cutting crew, tired from cutting down trees all morning, were sitting down to a much deserved lunch break. Munch Munch Crunch chatting up a storm. Timber ''anyone going to the family picnic the community is having this weekend.?'' Tree Cutter, looking nervously at his wind up watch, trying hard to keep track of time'' Can't my wife's mother in law is coming over to see the twins, that reminds me I have to pick her up after work, the stage coach is expected to arrive later today.'' Tall Trees,'' Not this time, I promised the kids I would help them with building a tree house, on the Big Oak Tree in our back yard.'' Roots, ''my Wife is due to have our 5th baby soon, she is quite cranky and craving all kinds of weird foods, last night she sent me to the shop, to pick up apples and bean bread, they do not even sell apple bean bread.. why can't she crave something normal.'' Splash '' My wife been nagging me to take her to the city lately, last time we went, she went on some crazy shopping spree, thank goodness the kids came, kept her pre-occupied, and I finally did not come home broke. '' Timber,'' Just bring the kids again.. '' Splash '' She wants to leave them with he sister Sweet Shine. this time'' snoring sounds interrupted the conversation, the stations looked over at the direction of the sound, Timber gets up and walks near Stomper, napping on the ground face in his bowl of oatmeal. Timber,'' Stomper.'' Stomper... snore Timber a little louder ''Stomper'' Stomper... snore. Timber, Getting annoyed, ''STOMPER !'' Freaked out, stomper quickly lifts his head, oatmeal dripping from the side of his face, ''don't cry daddy's here'' he said is a panic sleepy voice, letting out a big yawn.. looking up, ''oh its you guys.'' yawning tiredly.. Timber '' you got oatmeal on your face again'' Stomper letting out a sleepy yawn ''that is nice,'' lifting his hoof, wiping the oatmeal off his face, licking his hoof.'' ''So are you coming to the family picnic this weekend'' Timber asked curiously. Stomper "too tired, Rock Climber had us up all night crying'' yawns as he takes another lick of oatmeal, '' we tried giving him his milk, changing his diaper, and a bath, and he still kept crying.'' Timber ''How about you Ross Forest,'' the clyonies stopped eating, feeling awkward by the question. Juliette Dew Drop, appears out of the path with her saddle bag on her back, entering the lumber sight, the cool breeze blowing the smell of fresh cut trees, she sees Ross Forest and walks towards him. Juliette Dew Drop ''Hello Dear,'' reaching to her saddle bag open the flap dipping her hoof into the bag she pulls out a paper bag. ''You forgot your lunch.again '' Ross Forest,'' sorry about that, I will try to remember next time.'' they both nuzzle each other, then Juliette Dew Drop heads back towards to the path and disappears into the woods.. Taking out his daisy sandwich, muffin, and a canteen of lemonade, a note falls to the ground..Ross Forest stoops down to pick it up with his hoofs, he read the note I have something to tell you.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I love writing..Novel series is 25 books long. it covers 10 Generations within this family time line.. Yes i write it all out.. You can see some of my art here, granted they are sneak peaks until 2019 When i reveal the characters from my novel series. .. There are way more charecters than this Already Illustrated.. This is just crumbs.. When you browse my folder you will see i have other folders reserved for those who will be joining me on a creativity to success. www.deviantart.com/raphluna/ga… I was Inspired By Chrales Dickens ''A Christmas Carol.'' to Write no own version of the Well Known story. Raw Written Material in 5 days '' Once Upon a Christmas Tale.''23 Chapters long.. Here is sample to First Chapter. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ .......Once Upon a Christmas Tale........ .........Ch1........ "'Once upon a time, many years ago. During the time of Christmas, Frost, Ice, and, Snow. In the City of Forest Shine, A creature obsessed in business, That loved gold, With all his heart. Oh how he would quiver, At the thought to be apart. True his partner of long ago. Passed away within their successfully prime. Leaving the creature with everything, only wealth consume his mind. Yet let's continue further. For there is much to tell. How this creature went form obsession of greed. To being caring thoughtful and sharing with those in need.'' ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This one is Raw Written Material, Full of my Poetic works. However I want to go over it again and write in more Depth and Detail. I Will have this Novel finished and ready to publish by Next Christmas. Granted is Off from my 25 Novel series.. However in the Novel series the book "'Once Upon a Christmas Tale'' is Mentioned in the Novel series. I love Writing so Much, Illustrations, Poetry, and even Storytelling
  10. Here is the Cover of My Book and a Movie Poster, I made Yesterday... Here is the charecters for the 3 movies I'm pitching to the Entertainment industry along with the whole story line... Blossom Flowers Mother .... Blossom Flowers Father.... Blossom Flower.... Blossom Flowers Dragon Love.... First Victim to the Soul Stone.. An Archeologist out in the Wild Lands on an Expedition.... Rink part yet very important.. We have to find someone to release that monster... The Soul Store........ Once it lures its first victim to pick it up the victim is sucked into the to Soul Stone' and the soul stone morphs into to a Spirit Demon..... Crystal Frost The daughter of an Earth Pony and a Dragon.... Growing Up.... Getting older.... Crystal Frost Love Night Wing... Their Newborn Star Shine. This is the end of the First movie and the Book... The Second one has these charecters.... Crystal Frost returns... Not fully finished with the charecter list on this one... Night Wing Father of Star Shine.... Star Shine Daughter of Night Wing and Crystal Frost. Tiger Lilly Friends Wit Night Wing and the Nanny of Star Shine when her father returns to general Duty protecting the borders between The Kindom and the Wild Lands... Sun Swirl Star Shines First True Friend... Crystal Frost Obviously Returns... Skyler is in this One... Villain comes back He has a small part yet important.....need to add his Birthmarks She has a part too.. not much however she is in the movie too.. Need to add her birth marks too... What do you think so far...???
  11. Groovy, however my #1 rule is only at your time and convince. Family first you needs too. This is Crystal Frost the Core Character of my story that fits Perfectly in Long Heart Stone Since you so kindly offered... Here is some Royals from the World Long Heart Stone that I got done so far still have to work on their birthmarks... Alicorn Queen Light Ray..... Prince Vine Tree... Alicorn King Blizzard Storm Hoof... Prince Storm Cloud Stone... Bat Pony King Wish Wise Pri
  12. I love art so much and I love to tell stories... And I am making major plan to work really hard at writing a book, very beautiful with very strong powerful messages, so deep and very symbolic, it will make you laugh it will make you cry, and when you get to the very end it will make you all connect as a family, healing the bond and bringing you closer together than you ever were before. I also created a magical kingdom. With a lot of very beautiful character, they are leaders in their own lands however they struggles to try to keep their home countries together, however with the help from the Ambassador of Long Heart Stone Night Wing and his daughter Star Shine, they will go on one massive journey around the world helping world leaders come closer together to connect and work together to help solve problems in their own countries. And help restore peace around the world and help families come closer together and would leaders to work with each other to solve their countries problems . This is so big and deep, I pitched the whole thing to my niece and she loved it, she said it was way better than my little pony, I even have story ideas for in the series... Here is an example... Behold the Magical mystics wonder the oasis of the cat Ponies nestled in the desert of the Lands of sands Ruled by a Beautiful Cat Pony Queen named Moon Jewel … a golden stone Gem keeps the land lush and beautiful until it gets stolen by a bunch or Rouge of Pony Camel bandits whom constally travel around the world stealing other rare and unique artifacts… this causes the oasis to crumble and die leaving the luscious land in ruins . Leaving the cat ponies are now refugees with no were left to go. Night Wing now Ambassador. Of the Kingdom of Long Heart Stone.. Hells the cat ponies move to other lands until the magic Stone is found to help restore the Oasis and bring it back to life so the cat ponies can go home.. This story is so Origional is unique it is very special, this will truly move and connect with refugees children and their families who are going though this situation, their homes are no safe to live in and damaged and unlivable.. Once I'm completed my core store that fits perfectly in this new world. and got many story ideas lined up, that connect well with the story... I plan to pitch it all to the Entertainment industry, I am driven more than ever driven to get this out to the big screen and TV in the homes of children and families, growing a strong bond between children and their ponies ?
  13. With the kind words and the influence of others they inspired me to think big, break the chains that Hasbro limits me to, and come up with a new Kingdom and put my character Crystal Frost in it... So In Honor of those people I came up with a New Kingdom of my very own,, and put Crystal Frost story in The kingdom that I created ... Yes I came up with this massive wave of ideas on my own, within 4 days... Even made a song and a little jingle too... The Magical Mystical Kindom LongHeartStone... The kingdoms in my lands Majestic, Beautiful, yet very powerful. Full of mystic Magic and Wonder.. Meadow Cove.. The lands of the unicorns , only a few Pegasus ponies live among the unicorns, where on the top of the hill near the rockey cliff of the sea stands a tall majestic beautiful stone castle. Where a Majestic And Beautiful Allicorn Queen named LightRay decorated in a beautiful birthmarks Ruled all over the lands of LongHeartStone.. She has twin sister named Gypsy Mist Rose who is jealous of her twin sister Light Ray who has been chosen, by their father King Brave Rock Hoof, to rule all the lands, whom sadly passed away. Out of jealousy of her sister, makes a secret plot to take her out of power , so she can claim the throne and rule the land.. She has a secret crush on Blizzard StormHoof, she is even more jealous of her sister when she finds out he loves Light Ray and can't stand her, this just makes her even more jealous to get her sister out of the way.. MountStoneMore a land covered in clouds that blanket the earth and float low to the ground Ruled by a Unicorn Prince named Storm Cloud Stone. Some of the Pegasus are not happy being ruled by a unicorn, so this can cause a situation to occurs.. Some where so unhappy with their Prince being a unicorn that they moved to Meadow Cove, they rather live under the rule of a Pegasus pony even though the queen had a horn She at least has wings.. The Pegasus Flight Express is a Mail delivery service hat runs all across the lands.. Pegasus ponies sending mail all across the land of Long Heart Stone. The Pegasus pony names Letter Heart Shower with her team of mail winged ponies deliver letters and packages all across the lands.. A graceful waterfall that flows down into a giant really deep lake that flows out to sea... Moon Mist Valley ruled by the Merpony Queen names Sea Mist Swirl.. Her subject the merponies, have magics healing powers, they heal the earth dwellers and the creatures of the lake, a few did wonder out of their safe kingdom out to explore the sea, however sadly never were herd or seen from again.. Bloom Green Fields a beautiful luscious land, scattered with farm fields, close to the end of the land a tall classic old castle made of Stone Ruled by an Earth pony Prince Vine Tree with magic mystic healing powers that helps rejuvenate the land , preserving the nutrient of the soil to keep the vegetation fresh and healthy.. Tree Top Hills is a small lumber village nestled inside this kingdom... And our story starts. this is were Crystal Frost Mother was born... Cavern Caves is the home of the Bat ponies Ruled by the Bat king unicorn Name Wise Wish he has the magic to help ponies wake up from their dreams, and appear to them in a magic mystic cloud, to give wise advice and guidance.. When Night Wing is let go from his duty in the Wild Lands, and with Star Shine being more pony, dragon like her dragon pony mother, yet still have bat pony blood.. Her father moves to Meadow Cove . To live among the Unicorns and raise his daughter in their new home....this creates an uneasiness to some of the locals who do not like living among the bat ponies...and with Star Shine being so different from everyone else.. Wise Wish has a Major crush on Light Rays twin Sister Gypsy Mist Rose, however she finds his realm creepy, and has no desire to b his queen and live in a cave. Flame Mountain, Land of the Deadly and Dangerous Dragons Ruled by a Strong Dragon King named Storm Cloud Stone an island with a large volcano into the middle of it surrounded by small islands where dragons claim their territory. Some times battles occur fighting for the best islands to nest and make their homes.. After all Dragons main Food source is Fish. .however they sometimes venture in the wild lands for the rare tasty treat of ponies. Since the odd pony has the misfortune of wandering off from the lands of the ponies into the Wild Lands.. This is the home of Crystal Frost Father Skyler.abandon at a very young age, and being bullied a lot by other dragons he leaves his home land and journey to the Wild Lands Lands Of Sand a Kingdom in the middle of a desert, Ruled By a Dashing yet Bragging Wealthy Camel Pony Prince Named Sand Stone... His subject are the camel Ponies that roam the lands and live among the sandy desert.. He loves Exotic Strange creatures from different lands and pays handsomely for strange exotic creature, the more rare and exotic the better.. An Alicorn King named Blizzard Storm Hoof where he ruled the kingdom Frost Snap Woods, his Subjects the Ice ponies. obsessed into turning the beautiful kingdom for LongHeartStone to a frozen land of ice and snow. Blizzard Storm Hoof has a major crush on Light Ray and is obsessed to make her his Queen.. He sings too. She will be mine yes siree She will be mine you will see, A beauty like she A handsome like me she will take my hand, we will rule the land You will see.. Eeeeeeeee.. What a crazy obsessed stalker... Well You need a crazy in every story.. I guess.. In this frozen world you have the The polar ponies with their Male leader Paw Claw that lives with the ice ponies, and the snow rabbit ponies. With their Female leader Lucky Hoof Fluff .. Who are smaller ponies in size yet they are just as important too.. Islands of Sly. , an island right in the middle of the kingdom, rules by A Dark Unicorn Snake like Queen named, Shimmer Slither she is Jealous of Light Rays many Beautiful Birthmark, and her lack of birthmarks, and send her minions the snakes ponies to cause trouble in the kingdom We have the Wild Lands bordering the kingdom of LongHrartStone. In this land the creatures live wild and free no one lives here only wild creatures whom have not evolved. This is the place where Crystal Frost Parents go to have her and raise their baby pony dragon hybrid foal together... Ocean of Waves, a underwater realm teaming win pony dolphins Ruled by a Dolphin Prince names Wave Tide Deep Sea Turf teaming with shark ponies, Ruled by their king Chomp Crush he is very jealous that the earth dwelling ponies love the Dolphin ponies and try to stir up trouble a lot.. A Deer Wing Pony Guardian Called Bark Hoof that keeps order in the forest called Pine Tree woods teaming with wildlife. Then you have the small wing bee ponies with their Queen Lady Stinger who lives in a giant hive on the largest tree in the Pine Tree Woods.. Lake Camp Cloud is a small filliy and foal Camp site near a lake shaped like a cloud.nestled close to the Wild Lands in the forest of Pine Tree Woods.. .The Fox Pony bandits with their leader named Sly Fly , that are crafty sly creatures who like to steal from the ponies and fusion ponies all across the lands.. Turtle Pony princess named Shell bell that ruled the sandy beaches of Palm Tree Beach Leaf.. Where her subjects come and go .. The Jungle of Jungle Vine Ruled by a Gorilla pony unicorn King Named Strong Hold , The wing Parrot ponies with their Prince Feather Hoof they too live in Jungle Vine. the Parrot Ponies feel they are better that the Gorilla Ponies, because they have beautiful colors and that the birth mark is more colorful than their plain one... The Plain called the Flat Water Hole. Ruled by an old Zebra King named Stripe Wize, his daughter Lady Sunrise Shine has a major crush with prince Storm Cloud Stone, however her father forbids her marry him And the Frog ponies that live in the swamp. Called Swamp More Ruled By their their beautiful frog pony princess Lady Lilly bloom And the tiny flyimg spider ponies, ,Ruled by their king Web Ward whom are feared because they look too creepy. ..........Here is the story about the birthmarks of the ponies........... And the birth mark idea is great, ponies can be born with a birth mark anywhere on their body., some can even be born without one.. And be made fun of because of them being birthmark less.. Only ponies of royal blood are born with more than one birth mark. When Star Shine come to class with 3 birth marks the ponies are consumed with jealousy, she is so misshapen because of her physical looks , the ponies are really mean to her,, only ponies with more than one birthmark are royalty , she is not of royal blood, seeing her with more than one sparks jealously., so it is because of this as well she struggles to try and fit in. ...........The Traditions and holidays of the ponies.... ..... Fall Time .... The Festival of lights and the harvest of fun. Being a special event for ponies all across the lands, celebrating the truce of the lands, traveling from afar coming together celebrating the season of harvest. Winter Time.... The holy tradition holidays of the ''The Star of Life.'' Where the ponies celebrate with their close friends and family. Decorate a tree and exchange gifts with close friends and family.. Winter Time ... Winter Chill Fest a wonderful day to celebrate the wonder and beauty of winter Spring Time... Birth Mark Day of celebration... To kick off the first day of Spring..Where they have dancing, games and Prizes.Contest and fun. Some of the foals and fillies would tease the unlucky few, who are birthmark less. Summer Time.. Kicking off the first day of Summer with Splash Day. A day of fun in the sun.. ........The seasons Night and Day............. Alicorn Queen Light Ray the Alicorn when the last day of Spring ends she lest off a Golden light that shines all across the land bringing forward the days of Summer.. Earth Pony Prince Vine Tree When the last day of Summer ends he lets off a magic glow of orange light that shines all across the lands bringing forward the days of fall Alicorn king Bblizzard Storm Hoof when the last day of fall ends he Lets off a magic glow of white light that shine all across the lands bringing forward the days of winter Unicorn Prince Storm Cloud Stone when the last days of fall ends he lets off a magic glow of blue light that shines all across the lands bringing forward the days of Spring. The MerPony Queen Sea Mist Swirl controls Night that bring forward the moon.. The Camel Pony Prince Sand Stone controls the Day bringing Forward the Sun.. These 4 are the main characters that control the seasons in LongHeartStone.. They are responsible to keep the balance of the seasons and share this important role.. These 2 Main Characters at the ones responsible to keep the balance of night and day in the kingdoms an all the lands Everyone will have a unique special role in my world, and no matter how big or small They all have a special uniqueness of importance within the kingdom Orphanage called Hope Blossom run by a beautiful yet very Humble Unicorn called Gypsy Rain ...for the the fillies and foal's who have no home, or they been abandon . Or they were found parent less.. She has a crush on Prince Vine Trees however she is just to shy to tell him how she feels.. ________________________________________________________________________________ Here is an example of one of my character Flame Heart... She is a unicorn, she loves to dance, be a tease at times, and loves to hula hoop. she loves ribbons in her mane and flowers in her hair.. She became orphaned when a mysterious diseases, in her town, Rain Drop Falls, kills the older ponies, leaving only the young ones left, to fend for them selves. The guards from , were dispatched to the communities and towns that were most affected by this unexplained illness, to find any Survivors, She was one of the many young foals/fillies found. She was sent to live in an orphanage in Meadow Cove.. __________________________________________________________________________________ A New Villain named . .. A unicorn Dark Cloud... with mystic magcal , Jealous of the ponies with birthmarks, he steals the birthmarks of the ponies and places them his special Scrapbook.. Bubble Blue is a pony... Unicorn with one long birthmark cluster of bubbles on his front right hoof Swirl Shine.. Is the Son of Sun Swirl and Star Shine.. a very unique yet powerful unicorn mixed with his parents Physiques.. He is born with 6 very unique one of a kind birth marks.. ..........Here is the song that starts the story of my magical beautiful unique land...... Our world is shattered, in pieces it is true, We do not see eye to eye, We all stick, in our own view. True we are all different, We do not look the same Yet we all on, one world It's time we share the plan.. So listen to me, why fight when we are one. So much has happened, to the land and to the Sun. We need to unite together, to protect our families. Yes it true our lives are different , We must stand with what we know. But there is a better way If come and follow me Let's unite together And set our spirit free. So let's joint together In hoof's and in our hand We must work together To help protect our lands . So much has happened, Lest stand as one standing tall To unite together and protect our world Ever Shine and Free What do you think of my magical mystical Kingdom LongHrartStone.. Do you think it is creative or not creative enough ? . Is it different from Hasbro ideal...? Or not different enough...?
  14. Totally Freaking out.. Just completed a time line of events in Crystal Frost story this story is long and really Big.. now i know what happens in each time period and the Ending is totally EPIC... I just completed five chapters to the book series.. And Blossom Flower, Crystal Frost Earth pony Mother is not even born yet. The time line is really well thought out all organized and now that the Puzzle is complete the hardest part is over.. because the story about Crystal Frost is 100% complete it even has an Epic ending.. i do not want to spoil anything however the Ending is A total Freak out EPIC ending. I started out with a tiny puddle of water, and it just burst into a massive Epic Ocean. . I love Poetry I love to Illustrate.. Now I love writing stories.. Here is chapters one to the book series I'm Working on.. ___________________________________________________________________ In the middle of the woods, Deep in the thick forest of Esquestria, a small lumber Village, busled with earth ponies. They tilled the land, turning trees into lumber, distributing, the wood, being used, to build the homes for the ponies, all across of Equestria ''where did he go this time'' carrying her saddle bag Dew Drop walks through the small village. inside the village a small local grocery store, owned by MR and MRS. Shops, sold a variety of fresh fruits and vegetables. A post office called, Pegasus Express, run by Stamp Wells, where flying ponies would come and go delivering parcels and mail to the locals A small local paper called, News and Views. written, edited, photographed , by Flash dash the one and only reporter in the community.. A small school house nestled down by the brook, teaming with aquatic life, run my Miss Glass, where fillies and foal's would go to learn math, how to read, write, spell, and make friends. looking past the the school house, walking by the tall thick trees, Dew Drop notices a cleared path, she turns to follow the path and disappears into the thick treed forest... In a valley, stumps surrounding the lumber yard , timber stacked in piles. The pony wood cutting crew, tired from cutting down trees all morning, were sitting down to a much deserved lunch break. Munch Munch Crunch chatting up a storm. Timber ''anyone going to the family picnic the community is having this weekend.?'' Tree Cutter, looking nervously at his wind up watch, trying hard to keep track of time'' Can't my wife's mother in law is coming over to see the twins, that reminds me I have to pick her after work, the stage coach is expected to arrive later today.'' Tall Trees,'' Not this time, I promised the kids I would help them with building a tree house, on the Big Oak Tree in our back yard.'' Roots, ''my Wife is due to have our 5th baby soon, she is quite cranky and craving all kinds of weird foods, last night she sent me to the shop, to pick up apples and bean bread, they do not even sell apple bean bread.. why can't she crave something normal.'' Splash '' My wife been nagging me to take her to the city lately, last time we went, she went on some crazy shopping spree, thank goodness the kids came, kept her preoccupied, and I finally did not come home broke. '' Timber,'' Just bring the kids again.. '' Splash '' She wants to leave them with he sister Sweet Shine. this time'' snoring sounds interrupted the conversation, the stations looked over at the direction of the sound, Timber gets up and walks near Stomper, napping on the ground face in his bowl of oatmeal. Timber,'' Stomper.'' Stomper... snore Timber a little louder ''Stomper'' Stomper... snore. Timber, Getting annoyed, ''STOMPER !'' Freaked out, stomper quickly lifts his head, oatmeal dripping from the side of his face, ''don't cry daddy's here'' he said is a panic sleepy voice, letting out a big yawn.. looking up, ''oh its you guys.'' yawning tiredly.. Timber '' you got oatmeal on your face again'' Stomper letting out a sleepy yawn ''that is nice,'' lifting his hoof, wiping the oatmeal off his face, licking his hoof.'' ''So are you coming to the family picnic this weekend'' Timber asked curiously. . Stomper "too tired, Rock Climber had us up all night crying'' yawns as he takes another lick of oatmeal, '' we tried giving him his milk, changing his diaper, and a bath, and he still kept crying.'' Timber ''How about you Forest,'' the ponies stopped eating, feeling aquard by the question. Dew Drop, appears out of the path with her saddle bag on her back, entering the lumber sight, the cool breeze blowing the smell of fresh cut trees, she sees Forest and walks towards him. Dew Drop ''Hello Dear,'' reaching to her saddle bag open the flap dipping her hoof into the bag she pulls out a paper bag. ''You forgot your lunch.again '' Forest,'' sorry about that, I will try to remember next time.'' they both nuzzle each other, then Dew Drop heads back towards to the path and disappears into the woods.. Taking out his daisy sandwich, muffin, and a canteen of lemonade, a note falls to the ground ..Forest stoops down to pick it up with his hoofs, he read the note I have something to tell you.. ___________________________________________________________________ i know I'm weak at spelling and my grammar is horrid... however I'm not going to let that stop me. I have a wild imagination, my spouse calls me crazy, says its a waste of Time.. His idea of fun is looking at rocks, yawn at least story telling is way more fun.. now that the core is complete, now the fun part Writing all the chapters in detail Plus doodling all the characters in the story.. So yes I will illustrate all my work for the story too Once I give them all heart and a soul I will make my next move, considering a hand full of characters .are owned by Hasbro., I will make my pitch to them first about the Story of Crystal Frost... I also plan to join Oatley Academy http://oatleyacademy.com/ Hopefully they can help me into making Crystal Frost Story a reality to read and or view on the big screen. For the world to see and read. Yes i have that much fait in my character and Crystal Frost Story.. Thank You to everyone at Serif, Adobe discouraged me from bringing my doodles to life. Everyone at Serif help me spark my passion for Illustration, and you all gave me so much love in my art to go over and beyond to give each creation a heart and a soul. if it was not for Serif, Crystal Frost and the stories about he life would not exist Hugs Thank You Serif i will spread the word about your software, to everyone i know and get in contact with.. Adobe killed my art passion Serif put life back into my passion.. Hugs Everyone Thank You to the whole team at Serif, no matter the role you have in the business Great or small you are all EPIC in my Book Hugs..
  15. The Beautiful yet Deadly Soul Stone.. looks like a Beautiful, Smooth, shiny stone. the pony is lured into holding it into his hoof. as he feels the luscious smoothness, and admires the dark deep colors . He is obsessed to keep it into his hoofs... As his hoof grip tightens, as to not let the stone go, his body starts to adsorb into the stone... The Soul Stone starts to grow and morph into a demon like pony creature, a light orb, the soul of the pony, seen trying to get away, is quickly sucked back to the spirit demon like pony.. then the spirit demon awaken from his slumber fades off into the deep woods, looking for its next victim . The Soul Stone once it is picked up and consumes its first victim, it turns into a Spirit Demon... This spirit demon lives off absorbing the body of its victims and consuming their souls, it has the power to shape shift and it lives among the ponies.., it has the power to possess objects and lure the victims mostly baby ponies and young ponies by possessing their favorite toys. it consumes only Unicorn Earth Pegasus and Alicorns ponies young, old, even expecting Mother's to be as well.. Being a demon he is very crafty, and know how to keep well in hiding.. and how to blend in.. Unlike the Dark Shadow creatures he is immune to the light.. He can go out at day or night.. They have no enemies however they compete with dragons for food, dragons eat ponies however spirit demons need ponies bodies and their souls to survive... there is no known way to defeat a Spirit Demon, however the only way to stop him is to starve him back to his dormant state...when his time runs out to feed, move and live among the living , he is sucked back into the spirit stone there he stays dormant until another pony victim find the stone and is consumed by the stone and the Spirit demon is free to roam and feed... Quick brief story very errie and dark.. Granted this Villain is perfect. For the story about Crystal Frost... Crystal Frost mother is an earth pony, and this misshapen creature stalks her to absorb her body and take her spirit.. he fails in his attempt to consume the expecting earth pony. in the past he took the lives of ponies even the ones that were pregnant, it snarles hissing at her, very hungry, not understand why it can not feed off this pony. Not knowing that her unborn baby half dragon, immune to the Spirit Demon, protects her mother from this dangerous deadly creature.. when the father Dragon Appears it sees the dark vile creature hissing and starling wanting too feed off his love, he attacks it and the creature backs off and slithers back into the woods. and fades. looking for another victim to feed off... Through this vile creature the tale of the pony snatchers is born. Not fully done however wanted to sow my WIP... And share the creepy tale of the Pony Snatcher Like creature...
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