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Nice. The last page, bright yellow, white text hard to read. May just be my iPad.

Cecil 

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19 minutes ago, Cecil said:

The last page, bright yellow, white text hard to read. May just be my iPad.

I find the same, but I’m also viewing it on an iPad.

The text “Our staff comprises of specialized staff” needs improving. The word “of” doesn’t belong there (because “comprises” means “brings together”) and the repetition of the word “staff” is awkward: it might be better to simply say “Our staff comprises specialists”.

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I like bright colors, so the yellow looks good to me. I might even include some of the blaze orange from that one page with the orange uniform.

 

I agree that the black text on the "helmet in hand" picture is hard to see. It reminds me of the first brochure I ever made, which had black text over a very busy background--hard to read. I feel like those large bold yellow and white letters ought to have a thicker black outline too, to make them pop a little. (Adding a drop shadow might not fit the tone there.)

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