sfillibeck Posted February 7, 2019 Posted February 7, 2019 I was creating this draft document fully in AP in conjunction with the photo editing and graphic work in AD and AP. Publisher is simply a great tool and completes the family.... A4_Prospect_light.pdf mac_heibu and GarryP 2 Quote
GarryP Posted February 7, 2019 Posted February 7, 2019 Nice work. I have some comments, if that's okay... * I can't see the gears on the front page - either the 2D or 3D ones - "running smoothly". Some of them look like they would grind and others aren't connected. But don't feel too bad about this, the UK Mint produced coins with similar issues a while back; * I don't think you need to use the "Page" word in the page numbers, pretty much everyone knows what they are; * I like the 'gold' colour, very smart and professional; * Pages 2, 3, maybe 5&6, 10, 11, 15, maybe 17&18, 20 and probably 21&22 don't need a page number; * On the pages where you have a horizontal split between text and image, the text looks a bit too near the images to me; * The steps on the image on page 2 make the text more difficult to read; * The overall typeface choice looks good to me, especially the good clear body text; * The box behind the text on page 2 is too big, the padding inside is too big, and the 'gap' at the bottom of the text is too big; * The image on pages 7&8 is a bit too 'busy', there's a bit too much going on; * I've noticed quite a few grammar/wording issues that would cause problems with an English audience, but that might not matter to you; * The text over the image on page 17 isn't very clear, it's not immediately clear that it's not part of the image like the other text; * The back page is a bit bare, maybe put a lightened and blurred image as background (you're paying to have it printed so you might as well have something on it) All-in-all though, a nice draft document. Some issues that need a bit of thought/fixing but a good start. P.S. You might get more replies to this if you put it in the Showcase section instead of a discussion section. bowen192 1 Quote
sfillibeck Posted February 7, 2019 Author Posted February 7, 2019 Hi GarryP, thank you so much for the very detailed feedback. I will address those proposals immediately. It's great that guys like you take the time for this. Thanks again! It is highly appreciated! Stefan Quote
Michail Posted February 7, 2019 Posted February 7, 2019 A hand with only one finger looks a bit strange (page 0) Quote
sfillibeck Posted February 7, 2019 Author Posted February 7, 2019 Hi Michail, yep... right. too much scaling at the end of the day... I will change it to some more fingers Thanks Quote
GarryP Posted February 8, 2019 Posted February 8, 2019 You're welcome @sfillibeck I get lots of help from the experts in this forum so it's nice to be able to put something back into the community, even in such a small way. I will be interested in seeing a more refined version of the document. Quote
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