AndyPhotoSJ Posted November 20, 2017 Share Posted November 20, 2017 so as a GM of the night club i work for I also head up our bottle service program the season has been very busy for me but i finally got some time to work on some sample coverpages for my bottle service menu. my owner was adamant about 2 things. 1 make sure its something the other bars are not doing, and two make each color of the rainbow a page in the menu. 9 pages all together i didn't bother posting the others,. frankly as a sales person I'm not a fan of multiple pages. I already have a 1 page version for my sanity lol. but he signs the checks so TAAAADAAAA! lol aaaand if any of you come visits The Silicon Valley, y'all know where to find me. stop by and say hi. update. added my generic flyer for advertisement and a promotional flyer for a vodka we are offering Ecnavda 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alfred Posted November 20, 2017 Share Posted November 20, 2017 I hope those prices are per case, not per bottle! "Absolute" vodka should be "Absolut". There's also a stray comma after (Skyy) "Blood Orange", and I wouldn't have noticed the apostrophes missing from "Tito's" and "Dewar's" if you hadn't correctly included one in "Jack Daniel's". Nevertheless, it's an elegant set of pages. AndyPhotoSJ 1 Quote Alfred Affinity Designer/Photo/Publisher 2 for Windows • Windows 10 Home/Pro Affinity Designer/Photo/Publisher 2 for iPad • iPadOS 17.4.1 (iPad 7th gen) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyPhotoSJ Posted November 20, 2017 Author Share Posted November 20, 2017 oh I'm far from proofing thats why i decided to post. my dyslexia can do a number when it comes to typos so why not have other people look is my logic. thanks for the second set of eyes. lucky it didn't go to print. but i still need my boss to proof it as well Alfred 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alfred Posted November 20, 2017 Share Posted November 20, 2017 1 minute ago, LovesToDraw408 said: i still need my boss to proof it as well Would that be more than 70 degrees proof? Quote Alfred Affinity Designer/Photo/Publisher 2 for Windows • Windows 10 Home/Pro Affinity Designer/Photo/Publisher 2 for iPad • iPadOS 17.4.1 (iPad 7th gen) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyPhotoSJ Posted November 20, 2017 Author Share Posted November 20, 2017 lol here we try to stick around 80 lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alfred Posted November 20, 2017 Share Posted November 20, 2017 1 minute ago, LovesToDraw408 said: lol here we try to stick around 80 lol A few more for you: it looks as though you've used small capitals for most of the entries, but "Smirnoff Ice" is all capitals, "Budweiser" has a capital B and "Sierra Nevada" has a capital N (but a small caps S); "Jameson Cask Mates" should be "Jameson Caskmates". AndyPhotoSJ 1 Quote Alfred Affinity Designer/Photo/Publisher 2 for Windows • Windows 10 Home/Pro Affinity Designer/Photo/Publisher 2 for iPad • iPadOS 17.4.1 (iPad 7th gen) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyPhotoSJ Posted November 20, 2017 Author Share Posted November 20, 2017 awesome thanks for the catches Alfred 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyPhotoSJ Posted November 21, 2017 Author Share Posted November 21, 2017 here it the finished product i think there might be typo somewhere but my owner is not worried he loves the colors and thinks its time well spent. I printed on 110lb paper... card stock has to be sturdy during those consultations. very pretty, the binder i picked up for 10 bucks. thanks for the help made my day go by faster! i think some people would be embarrassed with the grammar. I've always had issues with my dyslexia that is why I like it when people catch my errors. it only really happens when i type or write. its like my hands move faster than my brain and my eyes arrange everything the way it should be. any hoo enjoy i keep getting -200 when i try to upload my photos what does that mean? https://drive.google.com/file/d/1AsiuIdrnX9HCeRlYoP2CR0SiGjOgXxGL/view?usp=sharinghttps://drive.google.com/file/d/1ZlxwmSl0s7smx8spkO1gS922WlFruEzy/view?usp=sharinghttps://drive.google.com/file/d/1A2XyYtvNeiYkXJbmFs6-01-Els1-UZN_/view?usp=sharinghttps://drive.google.com/file/d/1j3K5ww3PEXCJ279KPPftI7CGkZ1qSVlx/view?usp=sharinghttps://drive.google.com/file/d/1b1Jni96Q9aeYIwyM39XmmHIfVQwe6Dk6/view?usp=sharinghttps://drive.google.com/file/d/18npj9l4G5BfFK6sY2Z_z_PysZt4fI5NZ/view?usp=sharinghttps://drive.google.com/file/d/1BJVIGJ4vREIAz_6c5KpgWtbamnjvrkxx/view?usp=sharinghttps://drive.google.com/file/d/1l7U7udgWYqVSEnBQfitiFMSz_3p8BNdm/view?usp=sharinghttps://drive.google.com/file/d/16ZnkqXzCIwvLP8z-QoBuONKtYBmRlYy5/view?usp=sharinghttps://drive.google.com/file/d/158C-J7Y7ZB68NoKkgBuU49PbbuRmRpZm/view?usp=sharing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alfred Posted November 21, 2017 Share Posted November 21, 2017 That looks pretty good. The small capitals issue on the beers page is still there, and I would have written “non-alcoholic” (with a hyphen) if I had been doing it, but these are very minor issues. Speaking of non-alcoholic, I’m sorry I didn’t notice the “naval oranges” (instead of “navel oranges”) when contemplating the non-alcoholic beverages list the first time around. I’ve no idea what your “-200” error was all about. AndyPhotoSJ 1 Quote Alfred Affinity Designer/Photo/Publisher 2 for Windows • Windows 10 Home/Pro Affinity Designer/Photo/Publisher 2 for iPad • iPadOS 17.4.1 (iPad 7th gen) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyPhotoSJ Posted November 21, 2017 Author Share Posted November 21, 2017 omg your like a magic dictionary!!!!! yeah I get the -200 often i think my images might be to big to upload or something Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyPhotoSJ Posted November 24, 2017 Author Share Posted November 24, 2017 added 2 more at the bottom of the images one generic and a promo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyPhotoSJ Posted November 24, 2017 Author Share Posted November 24, 2017 ` The Thing about being self taught, is that not only do you learn to be patient with yourself, it also makes discovering new techniques that much more valuable to me. Learned a little more about creating transparent object and balancing it in it's environment. . #WinnigWithIn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alfred Posted November 24, 2017 Share Posted November 24, 2017 If you’re going to put periods in “VIP”, you need one at the end in addition to the two in the middle, like this: “V.I.P.” AndyPhotoSJ 1 Quote Alfred Affinity Designer/Photo/Publisher 2 for Windows • Windows 10 Home/Pro Affinity Designer/Photo/Publisher 2 for iPad • iPadOS 17.4.1 (iPad 7th gen) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyPhotoSJ Posted November 24, 2017 Author Share Posted November 24, 2017 haha i actually caught that right after i posted i figured someone was gonna catch it.. lucky my cut off to send t looks. I think thats where 10% of my errors come in. right on. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paulfromaustralia Posted November 28, 2017 Share Posted November 28, 2017 Excellent work Beautiful structures, colours and balance of textg with graphics. Well done indeed. AndyPhotoSJ 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zach Vegas Posted December 3, 2017 Share Posted December 3, 2017 Nice collection. Very clean. AndyPhotoSJ 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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