intro to web design - comments welcome

[diego]

Hey everyone,

 

I'm trying to get into web design and just finished my first site layout in AD. Looking for some feedback. What's good, what's bad

 

Also, to Affinity developers: this software is awesome! So powerful but still easy to use (that's coming from someone with zero design experience).

 

The individual page images are attached. The image of all of them together failed to upload, so it's linked here.

[Kodiak]

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Given the presented format and orientation, I presume

these are the "phone" version of your layout. Did you 

work on none mobile screens versions as well?

[diego]

Yes, sorry I forgot to mention that. This is the mobile site. I'll work on the desktop version next. It'll look similar but things will be rearranged a bit to fill the screen.

[Kodiak]

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I am a very bad typist — takes me to long to type and I need

a lots of time for corrections in English— but I would like to

share my thoughts with you… on Skype easier for me!

[diego]

Kodiak, I appreciate your interest! I'll message you on Skype.

[chrisbst]

I like the layout only thing worries me is with the Black background your pictures get lost in the black and fail to stand out.

Try a dark grey back ground to improve how the particularly B/W images display.

[diego]

Thanks chrisbst. I've gotten similar feedback from other people, saying the black and orange color scheme is too contrasty. I'm wondering if I like high contrast more than the average person, haha