Bulaka Posted September 2, 2019 Share Posted September 2, 2019 link: Graphic Design Addict Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cecil Posted September 2, 2019 Share Posted September 2, 2019 Nice. The last page, bright yellow, white text hard to read. May just be my iPad. Quote Cecil iMac Retina 5K, 27”, 2019. 3.6 GHz Intel Core 9, 40 GB Memory DDR4, Radeon Pro 580X 8 GB, macOS,iPad Pro iPadOS Continuous improvement is better than delayed perfection Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alfred Posted September 2, 2019 Share Posted September 2, 2019 19 minutes ago, Cecil said: The last page, bright yellow, white text hard to read. May just be my iPad. I find the same, but I’m also viewing it on an iPad. The text “Our staff comprises of specialized staff” needs improving. The word “of” doesn’t belong there (because “comprises” means “brings together”) and the repetition of the word “staff” is awkward: it might be better to simply say “Our staff comprises specialists”. Quote Alfred Affinity Designer/Photo/Publisher 2 for Windows • Windows 10 Home/Pro Affinity Designer/Photo/Publisher 2 for iPad • iPadOS 17.4.1 (iPad 7th gen) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AmateurAffiniter Posted September 14, 2019 Share Posted September 14, 2019 I like bright colors, so the yellow looks good to me. I might even include some of the blaze orange from that one page with the orange uniform. I agree that the black text on the "helmet in hand" picture is hard to see. It reminds me of the first brochure I ever made, which had black text over a very busy background--hard to read. I feel like those large bold yellow and white letters ought to have a thicker black outline too, to make them pop a little. (Adding a drop shadow might not fit the tone there.) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VectorWhiz Posted September 18, 2019 Share Posted September 18, 2019 The contrasting colours in the left hand column and adjacent images, make it difficult to decide the text properties that overlaps both areas. Perhaps consider applying a white of dark outline or outer shadow from the fx panel. Quote Home: https://vectorwhiz.com : : : : Portfolio blog: https://communicats.blogspot.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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