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JOLLORANDI

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Oh very nice looking tree and buildings!  Well done!  I love the organic, twisted branches. I do wonder if the yellow window isn't too bright for the scene?

 

A few more windows with their lights on might also help so that it does not stand out quite so much.  :-)

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Oh very nice looking tree and buildings!  Well done!  I love the organic, twisted branches. I do wonder if the yellow window isn't too bright for the scene?

 

A few more windows with their lights on might also help so that it does not stand out quite so much.  :-)

Yea I played around with some different things...originally there was no moon...just the single light . Threw the moon in last minute and decided to leave. I was going to fill out the tree branches much more, but decided to leave it as is for now.

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I very much like the moon and black silhouette on the green tones.  Well done, especially from the photo you had.  I find it difficult to abstract from something I've already seen — I suppose my imagination is easily corrupted.

 

I'm not much of a graphic designer, so I don't have much advice for what you can do with the window.  I am thinking a cloud midway of the photo, behind the street might be nice; thinking it might be nice if it was also flat (lighter green) with a darker stroke.

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