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Audrey Hepburn: Moon River

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Nice colouring, I think the eye nearest needs adjusting it doesn't look quite right, seems too low or needs rotating a bit, possibly more curve to the eyelid on the right side. Could be because the eyes together don't quite fit but something isn't quite right.

 


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Hi firstdefense, 

thanks for your words, I think the eyes are okay :) If you want, I send you the original file (Affinity Designer, it's not a commercial project), then you can try something for yourself, (or) later you could post your changes here. Do you want? 

Best Regards


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On 9/3/2018 at 11:14 PM, bodobe said:

Hi firstdefense, 

thanks for your words, I think the eyes are okay :) If you want, I send you the original file (Affinity Designer, it's not a commercial project), then you can try something for yourself, (or) later you could post your changes here. Do you want? 

Best Regards

ooh yes please, love tinkering

 


iMac 27" Late 2015 Fully Loaded, iMac 27" Mid 2011 both running High Sierra 10.13.6 - Affinity Designer/Photo, Publisher Beta 1.7.0.140, Illustrator CC, Inkscape, Blender, Sketchup, Pepakura Designer, MTC, Pixelmator & Pixelmator Pro + more... XP-Pen Artist-22E, - iPad Pro 12.9 B|  

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