Publoo Posted November 14, 2017 Share Posted November 14, 2017 Hello, I am presenting my latest project: Information banner for the website - Black Friday 2017 Regards GarryP 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GarryP Posted November 15, 2017 Share Posted November 15, 2017 Nice work. My only issue is that I can't see how the different bits of the sign are connected. In other words, I don't see how the whole thing is hanging together in space instead of most of it being on the floor. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dmstraker Posted November 15, 2017 Share Posted November 15, 2017 Really nice! Maybe widen the light angle? Make 'Black Friday' all lit. Quote Dave Straker Cameras: Sony A7R2, RX100V Computers: Win10: Chillblast i9 Custom + Philips 40in 4K & Benq 23in; Surface Pro 4 i5; iPad Pro 11" Favourite word: Aha. For me and for others. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Publoo Posted November 15, 2017 Author Share Posted November 15, 2017 2 hours ago, GarryP said: Nice work. My only issue is that I can't see how the different bits of the sign are connected. In other words, I don't see how the whole thing is hanging together in space instead of most of it being on the floor. Thanlks! It's hanging on the wall, not the floor ... 1 hour ago, dmstraker said: Really nice! Maybe widen the light angle? Make 'Black Friday' all lit. Thanks! Now better? dmstraker 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GarryP Posted November 15, 2017 Share Posted November 15, 2017 @Designia, I can see that's it's hanging against a wall. The problem I have is that I can't see how it is hanging at all. Only the P and A seem to be chained to something "off-screen" (even though the chain on the P isn't taut). The rest of the letters are either totally hanging in space by themselves or they are chained to other letters that are just hanging in space somehow. (I have no problem with the bottom two lines of text as there isn't the idea that they are connected to anything else.) It's not a big issue, I just think it spoils the realism a bit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dmstraker Posted November 16, 2017 Share Posted November 16, 2017 On 15/11/2017 at 11:30 AM, Designia said: Thanlks! It's hanging on the wall, not the floor ... Thanks! Now better? Maybe a tad more - so the 'Black Friday' is pretty evenly lit and the top line gets more light at the start and end? Quote Dave Straker Cameras: Sony A7R2, RX100V Computers: Win10: Chillblast i9 Custom + Philips 40in 4K & Benq 23in; Surface Pro 4 i5; iPad Pro 11" Favourite word: Aha. For me and for others. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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