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Nice work.
My only issue is that I can't see how the different bits of the sign are connected.
In other words, I don't see how the whole thing is hanging together in space instead of most of it being on the floor.

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Really nice!

Maybe widen the light angle? Make 'Black Friday' all lit.


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2 hours ago, GarryP said:

Nice work.
My only issue is that I can't see how the different bits of the sign are connected.
In other words, I don't see how the whole thing is hanging together in space instead of most of it being on the floor.

Thanlks! It's hanging on the wall, not the floor ... :)

 

1 hour ago, dmstraker said:

Really nice!

Maybe widen the light angle? Make 'Black Friday' all lit.

Thanks! Now better?

 

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@Designia, I can see that's it's hanging against a wall. The problem I have is that I can't see how it is hanging at all.
Only the P and A seem to be chained to something "off-screen" (even though the chain on the P isn't taut).
The rest of the letters are either totally hanging in space by themselves or they are chained to other letters that are just hanging in space somehow.
(I have no problem with the bottom two lines of text as there isn't the idea that they are connected to anything else.)
It's not a big issue, I just think it spoils the realism a bit.

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On 15/11/2017 at 11:30 AM, Designia said:

Thanlks! It's hanging on the wall, not the floor ... :)

 

Thanks! Now better?

 

Black_Friday_3.thumb.png.1b25f11fa3834854774d9e07861366c2.png

 

 

Maybe a tad more - so the 'Black Friday' is pretty evenly lit and the top line gets more light at the start and end?


Dave Straker

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Computers: Win10: Chillblast Photo with i7-3770 + 16Gb RAM + Philips 40in 4K; Surface Pro 4 i5

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