Eduardo Brito Posted October 22, 2017 Share Posted October 22, 2017 concept job milk factory. MEB, stokerg and A_B_C 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avo Posted October 23, 2017 Share Posted October 23, 2017 Nice lettering and character! Quote Follow me on Dribbble https://dribbble.com/g-avoyan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Staff MattP Posted October 23, 2017 Staff Share Posted October 23, 2017 This whole concept is great! Really nicely done! My only single little critique is that I think the lettering with 3d effect is weaker than just the plain, bold, flat version - but that's personal preference... A_B_C and Alfred 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GarryP Posted October 23, 2017 Share Posted October 23, 2017 I agree with all of the above. For me, the 3D lettering looks really great but I think it would be more suited to something related to juice or jelly, something that has a bouncy/fruity sort of thing going on. The flat design works better for me for a milk product. All in all, some really great work. P.S: In the third picture, what has happened to her eyes? The pink "stripes" spoil it for me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pxls2prnt Posted October 23, 2017 Share Posted October 23, 2017 I concur with the others...the 3D effect isn't really working well in my opinion. At least not when compared to the rest of the artwork with the cow. Also, watch out for the small things. I keep getting distracted by the little tiny piece of dark blue "shadow" to the left of the upper swoosh on the "L," as well as the very tiny white dot in the space between the "g" and the "á." You could probably lose both of those from the design and no one would be the wiser. MattP 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alfred Posted October 23, 2017 Share Posted October 23, 2017 1 hour ago, GarryP said: P.S: In the third picture, what has happened to her eyes? The pink "stripes" spoil it for me. And for me! Actually, to my mind the ones with the udder are all a bit too much. My favourite is the second last one, where there's just the cow's head looking out over the top of the word. 25 minutes ago, pxls2prnt said: Also, watch out for the small things. I keep getting distracted by the little tiny piece of dark blue "shadow" to the left of the upper swoosh on the "L," as well as the very tiny white dot in the space between the "g" and the "á." You could probably lose both of those from the design and no one would be the wiser. I hadn't noticed those details before, but I can't "unsee" them now! MattP 1 Quote Alfred Affinity Designer/Photo/Publisher 2 for Windows • Windows 10 Home/Pro Affinity Designer/Photo/Publisher 2 for iPad • iPadOS 17.4.1 (iPad 7th gen) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pxls2prnt Posted October 23, 2017 Share Posted October 23, 2017 2 minutes ago, Alfred said: I hadn't noticed those details before, but I can't "unsee" them now! Oops. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eduardo Brito Posted October 23, 2017 Author Share Posted October 23, 2017 8 hours ago, GarryP said: I agree with all of the above. For me, the 3D lettering looks really great but I think it would be more suited to something related to juice or jelly, something that has a bouncy/fruity sort of thing going on. The flat design works better for me for a milk product. All in all, some really great work. P.S: In the third picture, what has happened to her eyes? The pink "stripes" spoil it for me. she's ashamed rsrsrs..... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eduardo Brito Posted October 23, 2017 Author Share Posted October 23, 2017 thx for all reviews!!!! the flat design is better ever, 3d concept only made for client request MattP 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GarryP Posted October 24, 2017 Share Posted October 24, 2017 I wasn't going to say anything about the udder but now that the door has been opened I'll step through it. In the UK - I can't speak for other countries - there is a general tendency to not show the udder on illustrations/cartoons of cows, especially on cows that are standing up. Maybe we're just a particularly prudish country, but having an udder "in our face" is not something we're used to. When the udder is shown it's usually made quite small or transformed into a pink belly area. This isn't a hard and fast rule or anything like that - and I can give plenty of examples where this is not so - but it's something that might need to be thought about, from a cultural standpoint anyway. Maybe this is part of why some UK kids have trouble knowing where various foods come from: https://www.farminguk.com/News/Survey-shows-a-third-of-British-children-don-t-know-where-milk-comes-from_46824.html (Unfortunately I can't find the original report, even on the BNF's own website, and the best I can come up with is: https://www.nutrition.org.uk/press-office/pressreleases/1059-bnfhew2017.html ) I think the illustration would benefit by removing the udder, and it would make the whole thing more internationally usable if that was a potential option. Alfred 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eduardo Brito Posted October 24, 2017 Author Share Posted October 24, 2017 14 hours ago, GarryP said: I wasn't going to say anything about the udder but now that the door has been opened I'll step through it. In the UK - I can't speak for other countries - there is a general tendency to not show the udder on illustrations/cartoons of cows, especially on cows that are standing up. Maybe we're just a particularly prudish country, but having an udder "in our face" is not something we're used to. When the udder is shown it's usually made quite small or transformed into a pink belly area. This isn't a hard and fast rule or anything like that - and I can give plenty of examples where this is not so - but it's something that might need to be thought about, from a cultural standpoint anyway. Maybe this is part of why some UK kids have trouble knowing where various foods come from: https://www.farminguk.com/News/Survey-shows-a-third-of-British-children-don-t-know-where-milk-comes-from_46824.html (Unfortunately I can't find the original report, even on the BNF's own website, and the best I can come up with is: https://www.nutrition.org.uk/press-office/pressreleases/1059-bnfhew2017.html ) I think the illustration would benefit by removing the udder, and it would make the whole thing more internationally usable if that was a potential option. It seems that something is gone, and she does not know how it happened !!! MattP and GarryP 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eduardo Brito Posted October 24, 2017 Author Share Posted October 24, 2017 But she liked it a lot !!! Alfred, GarryP and MattP 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GarryP Posted October 25, 2017 Share Posted October 25, 2017 Ha, brilliant. You could say that she's now got a "cheesy" grin. (Groan.) Bad puns aside, I think that looks much better. Alfred, MattP and Eduardo Brito 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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