selstephen Posted September 1, 2017 Share Posted September 1, 2017 First piece in my classic car series done in AD. MartinB78, FriendDesign, tinpixel and 7 others 10 Quote Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/selstephen Twitter : https://twitter.com/selwynstephen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jer Posted September 1, 2017 Share Posted September 1, 2017 Beautiful! Quote ♥ WIN 10 AD & AP ♥ Lenovo Legion Y520 15.6" Laptop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MartinB78 Posted September 1, 2017 Share Posted September 1, 2017 Impressive! Only one little thing... For me it looks like the tires are floating in the air, because of missing ambient occlusion. A little bit of harder shodows where the tires contact the ground... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
selstephen Posted September 1, 2017 Author Share Posted September 1, 2017 41 minutes ago, MartinB78 said: Impressive! Only one little thing... For me it looks like the tires are floating in the air, because of missing ambient occlusion. A little bit of harder shodows where the tires contact the ground... Thanks for the feedback @MartinB78 - I missed that! Quote Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/selstephen Twitter : https://twitter.com/selwynstephen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
selstephen Posted September 1, 2017 Author Share Posted September 1, 2017 2 hours ago, jer said: Beautiful! Thanks @jer Quote Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/selstephen Twitter : https://twitter.com/selwynstephen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GarryP Posted September 2, 2017 Share Posted September 2, 2017 Fantastic work. Easily good enough for this: https://forum.affinity.serif.com/index.php?/topic/44775-get-your-affinity-work-featured/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FriendDesign Posted September 2, 2017 Share Posted September 2, 2017 It was very beautiful and realistic! Bravo! Quote UX/UI Designer & Affinity Designer user on Facebook | on Behance | on Dribbble AMD FX-9370 Eight-Core (Vishera)/ 4.4GHz/ NVIDIA GeForce GTX 750 Ti 2GB/ SSD/ HDD1TB / DDR3 2x8GB Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alfred Posted September 2, 2017 Share Posted September 2, 2017 5 hours ago, GarryP said: Easily good enough for this: https://forum.affinity.serif.com/index.php?/topic/44775-get-your-affinity-work-featured/ I'm sure it would have been, Garry, but the closing date for submissions was 25th August. Quote Alfred Affinity Designer/Photo/Publisher 2 for Windows • Windows 10 Home/Pro Affinity Designer/Photo/Publisher 2 for iPad • iPadOS 17.4.1 (iPad 7th gen) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkClown Posted September 2, 2017 Share Posted September 2, 2017 Excellent work! Quote i7-12700KF, 3.60 GHz, 32GB RAM, SSD, NVIDIA GeForce RTX 3070, Wacom Intuos 4 Tablet, Windows 11 Pro - AP, AD and APublisher V1 and V2https://www.timobierbaum.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GarryP Posted September 4, 2017 Share Posted September 4, 2017 Alfred: Ah, shame about that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VectorVonDoom Posted September 4, 2017 Share Posted September 4, 2017 Looks good. Was going to suggest some things but would make me look picky. Quote Marc ArtByMarc.me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
selstephen Posted September 4, 2017 Author Share Posted September 4, 2017 26 minutes ago, VectorVonDoom said: Looks good. Was going to suggest some things but would make me look picky. All suggestions welcome! Its all part of the learning process. Quote Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/selstephen Twitter : https://twitter.com/selwynstephen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VectorVonDoom Posted September 4, 2017 Share Posted September 4, 2017 OK. In a few places there's probably too much blur, for example in the wheels. The chrome on bumpers and mirror are good but the under-riders (or whatever they're called) which I presume are chrome too you've done differently, mainly a gradient (could be how they look in the photo with reflections). Tone down the gradient on the bottom side strip? (again could be how the photo looks). As the body has detail the tyres would be better having some tread detail too, probably doesn't have to be much, just so they're not perfectly smooth. A full shadow underneath would probably look better than just adding some under the wheels. So just expand the one you have and add extra at contact points, so from the wheel backwards. Unrelated to the actual drawing but you should export and post the exported image so it shows more detail. They lose a lot scaling down so no need to show AD's interface. Can always post another showing that or the wireframe. selstephen 1 Quote Marc ArtByMarc.me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
limas.design Posted September 4, 2017 Share Posted September 4, 2017 Looks awesome! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
selstephen Posted September 4, 2017 Author Share Posted September 4, 2017 2 hours ago, VectorVonDoom said: OK. In a few places there's probably too much blur, for example in the wheels. The chrome on bumpers and mirror are good but the under-riders (or whatever they're called) which I presume are chrome too you've done differently, mainly a gradient (could be how they look in the photo with reflections). Tone down the gradient on the bottom side strip? (again could be how the photo looks). As the body has detail the tyres would be better having some tread detail too, probably doesn't have to be much, just so they're not perfectly smooth. A full shadow underneath would probably look better than just adding some under the wheels. So just expand the one you have and add extra at contact points, so from the wheel backwards. Unrelated to the actual drawing but you should export and post the exported image so it shows more detail. They lose a lot scaling down so no need to show AD's interface. Can always post another showing that or the wireframe. Thanks for the feedback. Much appreciated. Quote Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/selstephen Twitter : https://twitter.com/selwynstephen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
selstephen Posted September 4, 2017 Author Share Posted September 4, 2017 23 minutes ago, limas.design said: Looks awesome! Thank you. Quote Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/selstephen Twitter : https://twitter.com/selwynstephen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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