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Hi Bodo,

 

great atmosphere, here in the forest, green, moody and forbidding. It's as if the forest was trying to bury the evidence, before the girl can recover and escape from her fate.

 

My only critique is this: you have covered her face and her eyes with the text and have left a lot of free space in the top portion of the picture (place the text there).

 

We've lost a snapshot, of what is going through her mind.

 

When it comes to painting eyes, you've got it down to a fine art. B)

 

(Grammar cop at work again) :P

Edited by peter

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Hi; Bodo!

 

Great work as always. The atmosphere certainly promise some chills down the spine!

I agree with Peter, -I kept on looking for her eyes.

I think that if you could see the expression in her eyes it would add to the composition. Other than that, excellent!!


- Affinity Photo 1.6.7

- Affinity Designer 1.6.1

 

MacBook Pro 8 GB
MacBook Pro Mojave 10.14.2

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Hey Bodo!

 

Dankes.

 

It's perfect. :D  :D  :D

 

I really like the way that you placed the text is behind the girl's head. The image, background space and text is balanced beautifully: pure poster material. However, in my humble opinion your original image is more suited to film and television, when the title sequence fades the text in and out in the middle area of the screen. This is very Scandi(navian) drama-esque and draws you into the writer's world.

 

peter

 

PS eyes have definitely become your trademark, here in the forums. :ph34r:


MacBook pro, 2.26 GHz Intel Core 2 Duo, 4 GB 1067 MHz DDR3, NVIDIA GeForce 9400M 256 MB, OS X 10.11.6

 

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Hey Bodo!

 

Dankes.

 

It's perfect. :D  :D  :D

 

 

 

My words exactly! :)


- Affinity Photo 1.6.7

- Affinity Designer 1.6.1

 

MacBook Pro 8 GB
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