affinity designer My First Designer Work!

[baal_uriel]

Hi there, 

 

I need some help, this is my first work as a Designer (actually I´m no Designer, I just like a lot this stuff) but I do not know what else to put. It is a Digital Invitation that the client well sent from her smartphone via IM (whatsapp, iMessage, BBM, etc) It is about a Bach Flower Course. Could you guys give some ideas? 

 

Thanks a lot!

 

 

 

[David]

Always makes me chuckle when people post "Im no designer" then I open it and its a beautifully neat piece of work ;)

 

So great start.. from my point of view the illustration is lovely, but the font is "childish" if you want the curly fonts I would change to a more grown up classic script font or for readability a sans serif font like Open Sans (which is free) but keep it a light weight to compliment the illustration.

[Lee D]

Really nice work  :)

[peter]

Always makes me chuckle when people post "Im no designer" then I open it and its a beautifully neat piece of work ;)

 

So great start.. from my point of view the illustration is lovely, but the font is "childish" if you want the curly fonts I would change to a more grown up classic script font or for readability a sans serif font like Open Sans (which is free) but keep it a light weight to compliment the illustration.

To reiterate what David has said...DTP is all about getting the image, wording and font selection just right. When they work together, they become as one: stable, balanced and complementary.

 

The flower is complete, so well done there. If you want to change the font, hold the flower's image in your mind's eye and choose the font that compliments that image. So choose a font that emulates the flower...long strokes, wide curves and Gothic angles.

 

You put a lot of effort into the flower, so the font deserve equal attention. 

 

You can do it.

 

HTH

 

peter